music within

 

“Am I dead?”

“Yes.”

“Aw…”

“Your body perished, but your spirit lives on.”

“How can my spirit live on when there is no hand to touch, no lips to kiss, and no heart to beat?”

“You have left yourself inside people whom you met. They will see you, hear you, and feel you, whenever they think of you.”

“Oh, like music … a piece of music they once heard…”

“Yes. They will remember you.”

 

(73 words)

For Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers

PHOTO PROMPT © Jan W. Fields
PHOTO PROMPT © Jan W. Fields

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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19 Comments Add yours

  1. One of the most beautful posts I have ever read.Whatever you believe, God bless you, now and for always. Anton

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    1. nelkumi says:

      Wow … thank you so much.

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  2. Dear Nelkumi,

    We do live on in the hearts of those who love us, don’t we?

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. nelkumi says:

      We do… Thank you, Rochelle, for hosting this, reading our works, and taking your time to comment.

      Like

  3. cynthiamvoss says:

    That’s a beautiful way to put it, like a piece of music they once heard. Very meaningful.

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  4. liz young says:

    Like music once heard – I like that thought.

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  5. You have started me thinking, if only happy memories could be planted and allowed to grow, such fine flowers we might have. Thank you.

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    1. nelkumi says:

      Thank you for the visit.

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  6. andysmerdon says:

    Love it nelkumi 🙂 Thank you for sharing this beautiful post

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    1. nelkumi says:

      Thank you for the visit! 😊

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  7. mscwhyte says:

    An evocative story!

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  8. gahlearner says:

    A beautiful story, linking the memory of loved ones to the music is especially effective.

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    1. nelkumi says:

      Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

      Liked by 1 person

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