It is like stepping onto miles of sands. I try to walk, but my feet get caught, and I couldn’t move.
I don’t know who I am anymore. I don’t wanna see anybody. I don’t wanna do anything.
There comes a thick storm cloud. I will be drenched soon. There might be a gust as well.
I’d better hang on.
I dig my feet deep and think that I might have more sand in me.
(75 words)
For Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
Great story! I feel this person has almost given up but you give them strength in the end by digging their feet into the sand further to protect himself/herself from the storm. Very good!
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Thank you, PJ!
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This is beautiful and encouraging. To me,it reads like a poem.
Ellespeth
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Thank you. I’m blushing. 😊
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Nicely done. 😊. Life can be so much like that.
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