The sole object of this trip was to see you.
Planning and packing, traveling and getting lost, taking slow steps at times and finally getting closer towards you.
And, I now see you, your broad shoulders and crooked head, the shadow of you at the top of the stairs … where I can never reach.
(54 words)
For The Daily Post’s daily prompt: “Object”
For Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
So sad, she went through so much just to be able to see him yet cannot reach him. Much said with only a few words. Wonderful story!
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Life can be like that, I suppose… Thank you for taking your time to read and comment, PJ.
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Yes, it certainly can, sadly.
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I can’t remember if I ever welcomed you to the challenge. In case I didn’t, welcome to FFfAW challenge. We are happy to have you join us!
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Thank you!
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:o)
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A very succinct tale and a joy to read.
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Thank you.
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Beautifully done Nelkumi
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Thank you.
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Interesting take on this. Nicely wrapped up so quickly.
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Thank you for the visit and comment.
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