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Sweeping the pane is a tear of rain.
Speeding away is a bawling train.
“Where am I going?” is a hunt in vain.

photo by Wilson Lau https://unsplash.com/photos/MvjO-aMRwkE
photo by Wilson Lau https://unsplash.com/photos/MvjO-aMRwkE

 

For Three Line Tales, Week Eighteen and The Daily Post’s daily prompt: ” Purpose

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15 Comments Add yours

  1. Oooooo, I like this a lot!

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    1. nelkumi says:

      I’m glad you like it. Thank you for your comments.

      Like

  2. andysmerdon says:

    No hunt is in vain – its always an adventure 🙂 I like this a lot nelkumi.

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    1. nelkumi says:

      Goooood! 😀

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  3. Brief and beautiful=)

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    1. nelkumi says:

      Thank you. 😊

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  4. swritings says:

    Wonderful! ☺

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  5. bikurgurl says:

    Very powerful! I love the line “tear of rain” — it totally sets up the rest of the story. Beauty 🙂

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    1. nelkumi says:

      Thank you so much for reading it and commenting.😊

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  6. maisstrauss says:

    “Hunt in vein”…brief but says a million and one things! I love this👏🏻

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    1. nelkumi says:

      Thank you, thank you very much.😊

      Like

  7. caillenjames says:

    Splendid. You have an amazingly impactful way with words; you use so few to say so much. Wonderful.

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    1. nelkumi says:

      Wow, thank you. I appreciate you taking your time to visit and comment.

      Like

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