trapped in their world

I am tired of being cornered. I live in the fake world. All these false goodness, kindness, righteousness, boasting, and pity are closing in and about to crush me.
I hate these people and this world.


I don’t care about what they are shouting. It seems okay to me. Yeah, things could be different, but ain’t. So why bother? I’m fine the way it is.
In my world, everything is just grand.


I can’t understand why they don’t get it. Don’t they see I’m right? It’s obvious.
My conviction is strong and won’t be altered. I will detach myself and live in my world. I won’t compromise my independence.


And, they all lived separately happily(?) ever after.


(117 words)

photo prompt

For Sunday Photo Fiction – July 3rd, 2016 and The Daily Post’s daily prompt:”Autonomy





6 Comments Add yours

  1. mandibelle16 says:

    Nicely written Independance can be very important. I can understand why she wouldn’t want to low it.

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  2. SOmetimes seperately is happily. Good story.

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    1. nelkumi says:

      Thank you for hosting the challenge and taking your time to comment.

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      1. ALways happy to 🙂

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  3. Relating that image to the story of independence was creative! Nice one.. 🙂

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