I can’t go any farther. I’m hungry, and my arms and legs are too tired. I can hardly breathe. I’m almost there, though. I can see her, her fearless figure with the light in her hand. And, once at her feet, I’ll be free at last. I must keep going, push with all my might. But, this water, it’s getting deeper and deeper. Wait a minute. What? Is she crying? Miss Liberty?
(72 words)

For Friday Fictioneers and The Daily Post’s daily prompt, Depth
clever – this piece (poem?) makes me feel… desperate? It also reminds me of the hardships faced by refugees. Excellent nelkumi 🙂
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Thank you. My mind is going everywhere! 😝
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I’m enjoying where it is going 😀
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Oh … alas I only have to open up a newspaper and understand whey she’s crying.
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😉
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Good take on the prompt, Nelkimi. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you.
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Beautiful words to accompany a wonderful picture! – K
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Thank you. I can’t take credit for the picture, though! 😝
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Great read
Thank you for visiting
See you on the other side of creativity
Sheldon
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Thank you for the visit and comment.
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