Once upon a time, there lived a boy and his younger sister.
One night, their evil parents left them in a forest, and the boy and sister wandered about hand in hand because they were just kids and didn’t know how to get back home.
They came upon a house made of chocolate and candy and were lured inside because they were just kids and hungry and locked up by a witch who lived in it.
But, they were smart kids. They outwitted the poor old witch, shoved her into the oven and baked her at 450˚ Fahrenheit.
They took the witch’s treasure because they were just kids and didn’t know stealing was a felony and lived happily ever after until they grew up and weren’t kids anymore.
(128 words)
photo prompt provided by TJ Paris
For Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers – week of August 16, 2016 and The Daily Post’s daily prompt, Youth
Nice modern fairytale!
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hehe…
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Hahahaha! Cute fairytale! They cooked the witch! LOL!
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Mwahahaha….!
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Whoa! What a twist on a classic fairytale! Nicely done 🙂
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Thank you! 😊
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Hansel and Gretel’s modern version! COOOOL!!!
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Hehehe…😉
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those weren’t kids they were 21 st century tecno-savy five year old human beings! kids became extinct years ago 🙂 Anton
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Haha… 😆
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Interesting!
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😉
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This reminds me of the Grimms brothers Hansel and Gretel. It serves the witch right.
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The photo prompt made me think of the house in the tale. Thank you for the visit and comments.
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Loved it.. I could feel the irony towards the end. They lived happily until they weren’t kids anymore..
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the visit and comment.
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Your welcome..
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I love the way you wrote this – it reads like such a sweet innocent story despite the abandonment, kidnapping, murder and theft 🙂
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Thank you for the visit and comment. 😊
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Really nice and truly short. You are good. I am a 10 year old boy, also trying to write short stories. Just started my blog on short stories. Come and read my first story on http://shortstories4kids.wordpress.com . And tell me what u think.
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Good luck with your stories and blog. Thank you for the visit.
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I wonder how long it takes to bake a witch at 450F? I bet she was tough and stringy. I’ve always heard that about witches.
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gamy … I heard.😉
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hehehehehe my son is saying the real story is bit different mommy.. (he is 6)
now he is telling me the real story hehehehehe
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