As far as the eye can see, all mine! The dry lake we’re standing? Mine! See that twig over there? Mine! See that dead bush up there? Mine!

I possess wealth and power. I am the king, shogun, numero uno. I can do anything I want.

Some criticize. But, who cares? Just look what I’ve got.


For Friday Fictioneers – 10 February 2017 and The Daily Post’s daily prompt, Criticize.


15 Comments Add yours

  1. neilmacdon says:

    Did I hear Donald Trump in this?

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Jade M. Wong says:

    Agreed with a previous commenter, I think this post was definitely channeling Donald Trump.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. granonine says:

    I thought I heard a hint of George Soros in there.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. nelkumi says:

      Well, I’m not familiar with how he talks, though…

      Liked by 1 person

  4. What a lovely change of attitude and perspective, Nelkumi. You are indeed the queen of your castle & are so glad to be. A very encouraging post 🙂 Anton

    Liked by 1 person

    1. nelkumi says:

      Thank you, Anton. 😊


  5. Great piece! Very strong characterization.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. nelkumi says:

      You are too kind. Thank you.

      Liked by 1 person

  6. michael1148humphris says:

    Sharp and to the piont – your title line said it all

    Liked by 1 person

  7. magarisa says:

    Clever and witty!

    Liked by 1 person

      1. magarisa says:

        You’re welcome!

        Liked by 1 person

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