In the backseat of the limousine, he checks his phone. Another deal settled, and money will be transferred. He only deals with cryptocurrency and hasn’t seen paper money for years.
He loosens his silk tie, sits back in the leather seat, and looks out the window. The hazy sky reminds him of the day so long ago when he, a child in worn-out clothes, ran away with the crumpled five-dollar bill in his pocket. He trusted no one then.
His limo cruises along the highway, heading to his empty penthouse apartment.
For Friday Fictioneers – 31 August 2018.
PHOTO PROMPT © Nathan Sowers
the “empty penthouse apartment” is powerful, without you having to say more
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Thank you so much.
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the trust we lose from young build up a wall so strong, a sad but well written message
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Thank you.
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Wow, I like this very much, it’s relatable on so many levels.
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I’m glad you enjoyed. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
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It was worthy! lol well I’m sure it all is (:
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😉
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The phrase “he trusted no one then” does suggest he has built trust in at least one person since he ran away with the crumpled five dollar bill. I hope he finds someone to share his prosperity.
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I do, too.
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All that money and no one to share it with. Nicely done.
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Thank you.
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Money can buy everything except what matters most.
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Indeed…
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At least he found love in money.
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hehe…
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The not so almighty dollar. Nicely done as usual 🙂
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You’re too kind, Andy. Thank you. 😊
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Brilliant story. A portrait of a human being in so few words.
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Thank you.
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Intense.
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too much…? 😁
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Not really! but that’s life.
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At least he has money now.
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haha…
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Hope he finds someone to share all his wealth.
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would be nice…
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Money ain’t all it’s cracked up to be.
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Can buy a lot, though…
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Well that’s true! 🙂
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Powerful narrative.
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Thank you.
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