The restaurant is busy with lunch patrons. We take our table next to the open window. The breeze attempts to calm my nerves while I catch up with my friends.
Their bemused smiles never waver while I talk about the book I read. I listen with polite nods while they talk about their families whom I have never met. None of us finish the food.
Ice in my glass of water melts and clinks. The glass drips with sweat. The breeze pats my hand.
“Stay in touch, okay?”
As we part, we make no promise for the next rendezvous.
For Friday Fictioneers – 10 August 2018.
PHOTO PROMPT © Ronda Del Boccio
Beautifully observed
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Dear Nelkumi,
So true to life and well written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle.
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Full of real sad feelings. Do we all feel like this sometimes?
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I know I do…. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
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Yes, it does happen. Beautifully written, Nelkumi.
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Thank you.
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I really enjoyed this. Well done.
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Thank you.
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I like the way you have the objects mirror the characters’ emotions; “The breeze attempts to calm my nerves”, “The glass drips with sweat” and “The breeze pats my hand.” You’ve observed this type of encounter accurately and reproduced exactly the feelings of the participants.
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I think we’ve all had a lunch like that. I’d give them one more chance before I became too busy to meet them again 🙂 She might be pleasantly surprised next time.
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The time shared is woven into memories and, I don’t think the relationship ever dissipates. 😉
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People move apart. Sad but true.
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Indeed. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
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It was so sad that no one listened, but it made a fine story.
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It is sad… Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
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Well-observed.
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Thank you.
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