blah blah blah -- 独り言, stories -- お話the swing She used to kick her feet high up in the air, swing into her fantasy, and wonder, “What will I be when I grow up?” Once she grew up, however, she swayed to and fro between her dream and reality, and often mulled over, “What am I doing?” The swing is now stationary, and she spends her time caressing the past and watching the loved ones celebrate her fascinating life. photo by Ben Rosett For Three Line Tales, Week Thirty-Seven ShareClick to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window)Like Loading...
“She used to kick her feet high up in the air, swing into her fantasy.” You had me gripped from line! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
I love the line, “Caressing the past” — lovingly portrays how we look at our memories 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
WOW, that final line really is a clincher!! And I love your phrase “caresses the past”…WOW. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
You packed a lifetime into three lines. Well written and poignant. I also want to thank you for stopping by f-stop fantasy, my own little fantasy world. 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
“She used to kick her feet high up in the air, swing into her fantasy.”
You had me gripped from line!
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Glad it spoke to you. Appreciate the visit and comment!
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great piece this week! Beautiful prose. It flowed so well.
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Thank you very much!
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I love the line, “Caressing the past” — lovingly portrays how we look at our memories 🙂
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😊
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So much in so few lines — Brilliant!
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Thank you!
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🙂
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WOW, that final line really is a clincher!! And I love your phrase “caresses the past”…WOW.
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You are too kind… Thank you.
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Never too kind, always sincere–you’re welcome 🙂
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“Caressing the past” — oh, VERY good!
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Thank you.
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What a bittersweet story. Beautifully written!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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You packed a lifetime into three lines. Well written and poignant.
I also want to thank you for stopping by f-stop fantasy, my own little fantasy world. 🙂
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Thank YOU for the visit and comment.
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