The sultry wind caresses her wispy hair as she steps down the gangway. Once on the pier, the local men, children, and women surround her, their hands extended ― some with cheap scarves and trinkets, some empty.
She passes the buses waiting for passengers, who have paid to be taken to places with more hands before returning to the never-ending food and the towels folded into the shapes of animals.
She approaches a driver of a taxicab.
“Temple?”
He nods.
She no longer travels to see the world but to be alone.
PHOTO PROMPT © David Stewart
For Friday Fictioneers-21 April 2023.
Oh yes 🙂 I know that feeling Kumi 🙂
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I do, too. 😉
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I love the idea of travelling to be alone
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So do I.
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I love how you ended this piece lovely 💕
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Thank you
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I once wrote a story about a man who traveled to another planet billions of years in the past to be alone. Instead he found a lost love and a purpose.
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Aha!
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A moment of meditation and extraction from the drudgery of modern life.
You have created a mystery around your character. I liked that.
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Thank you kindly.
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Great description of the tourists and those who “greet” them – they may walk the same streets, but live in such different worlds. I’d rather travel as she does.
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Me, too.
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Fascinating perspective, Nelkumi. I will ponder on it. Nice to see you writing again at FF.
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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i always thought no man is an island. well, i could be mistaken then. 🙂
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Entire of itself? 😁
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Nice one Nelkumi!
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Thank you!
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Travelling to be alone. a beautiful concept.
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Thank you.
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I long to do this. Beautiful writing. ❤️
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Thank you
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